Literacy Narrative Annotations

This one is about a relationship between Alexander and Kayla

This one is a question to Kayla.  She didn’t make it clear in the beginning which topic she was going to focus on for her narrative.

This is a question to Sam.  He didn’t give very much context to the readers, so we are left with questions about his history.

I am questioning the process that Sam went through to be able to write.  The way he describes it, it seems as though he learned to write in 10 minutes.

This is not comparing teacher identities, but parent identities, comparing to Williams

Questioning Hannah, she doesn’t specify early on how old she is when the events that traumatized her took place.

These two annotations are questioning Blake’s perspective of writing.  He doesn’t have a clear direction with his writing.