Introduction: I didn’t have to change much in my intro. I only had to add a section explaining what IMRaD is, and how it relates to Gee and Haas.
Evidence and Explanations: I didn’t add any evidence, but I did add explanations. I needed to add some explanations, because I was lacking in connecting Haas and Nair and Nair to Gee. I also needed to add transitions between the paragraphs.
Reorganization: I didn’t move sentences around, although I did edit them, but l did have to move some paragraphs for better organization. Before, my ideas tended to jump around a lot, but after I reorganized, the paragraphs flow together a lot better.
New Paragraphs: I didn’t add any new paragraphs, I didn’t need to, I just added to existing paragraphs and rearranged some of them.
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